Cool

This is the sickest version on the page! Great work!

Uh...no

I'd say you were on a better start with the first version. You may think it sounds better, but I'm just curious, but why do you think it's better?

It's very hard to listen to, it's such a low tone, all I really think you did was lower the pitch in some program, and lowering the pitch not only lowered the quality of the sound but the speed of the song as well.

You are right about the slight alteration, but I'd have to say you could've tried harder when mixing this song.

Seriously though Spikespeigel274, the original version was really really good, you could've just added more to the original, and not completely change the feel/groove of the song.

Better luck next time! :D