I like the drums and the beat you have.

too shooort :(

but pretty nice you kicked up the original rythm

yeah ok

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Its good, but here's the thing. I realize this is a loop, but if something is only 0:46, it shouldn't have a 14 second intro, followed by a 20 second buildup. The beat is nice though, and it loops very well. It seems a little.. plain though. Of course, I guess that isn't really your fault, since you're just remaking an existing song. Anyways, after about 35 seconds, it gets pretty good. Unfortunately, that only leaves 10 seconds left. Maybe if you just shortened the intro, and lengthened the part at the end, it would be better.