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The Broken Man

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Beautiful, really catches my emotions this is at the pinnacle of 'Catching Human Emotions'.
Beautiful piece.
Beautiful Instrument usage.
Beautiful Music.

~Jack 'Dexxa' Tansley

This review is gonna be quite personal and a little harsh, but here we go...

I have known your music since a few years ago. Piano music is pretty much my favourite kind, and I've always found your stuff promising but somewhat lacking. Many songs sound very similar to each other. Transitions are always of the "slow to a stop, wait 2 seconds, go on again" variety. The pace/mood/atmosphere of the song never really changes. To me (and I re-iterate that this is personal and harsh), it sounds like you want to limit each song to "one thing" so you can save up material to pump out more tracks.

Perhaps you're happy with what you create, and this after all is free music so I never stop appreciating the artists generosity of sharing their stuff with us here. But I think one of the best things about the audio portal is for artists to get feedback about their work, so that they can build upon what they're good at and improve at what they're deficient at. I think this is definitely something you can take more advantage of.

I think you have great understanding of chords and good at creating a certain type of atmosphere. I only hope to see some growth and evolution in your music in the future.

MarkySpark responds:

This is 3 years later..... I have grown a bit :-)

Simply incredible. What truly makes a piece beautiful, is the ability to capture truly human emotion. You did a fine job of that here. I have nothing more to say, because your song was more powerful than any words.

Nice composition, i just would like more bass on the strings.

nothing broken about this song

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MarkySpark
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Uploaded
May 1, 2012
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Genre
Classical
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7 MB
3 min 49 sec
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