Not bad, i like the general layout of this song, but this 32 bit sounds arnt going to get annywhere these days sadly, its not like it used to be but really its not what i or anyone else likes but what you like to make, but im saying if you want to impress a bigger crowd get rid off the 32 bit sounds, or atleast use them only as effects or transitions, other than nice work :)
~DJ Astromii