I like it, but if its about the "end of all", shouldn't it be more provoking, more powerful?
Think about it this way. The Hero is in a face-off with the guy who just back-stabbed the villain. The Super Villain. So, shouldn't it be stronger?
I was more thinking along the lines of my last year of high school almost being over, but yeah, if it were something like way you were saying, it would need to be much stronger.