Hollow Dreams (WIP)

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Hollow Dreams (WIP)

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This is my latest project so far... not exactly in a happy mood.. more like broken/angry mood. this is what became.

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ModsSukCock

2012-03-20 01:44:27

I know its a wip, I don't feel worthy of even reviewing but I think you can do better. Around 20 sec was pretty good drum fill to bring in the bass. But I would add like a synth arp or strings in the background to accompany the bells to make it a little interesting. Even with the drop at the beginning it still seems like an intro imo. I would think adding some high hats for rhythm would be nice addition too. Keep at it.

ParanoiaZombie responds:

Thx for the feedback =) I'll take it into consideration! =D

Emberwave

2012-03-19 23:07:30

A bit short stating the obvious but still good.

ParanoiaZombie responds:

haha, WIP means work in progress in case you didn't know xD
It's not finished, i will also be extending this begining =)