This is creatively good! you should definitely finish it!
and yeah, like you said so your self, you should have more bass.
so then my question is, why not? why didn't you put bass in it?
and one more thing, making music is not about what other people think about it or something, its about pouring your feelings and emotions in a colourful way for your self or others to hear. and they don't have to like it, but you do! (sorry for poor grammar, i'm not from an English speaking country)