Good but I think your lyrics are bullshit. Its like your got all these cool words but think about what you are saying:
My teeth contain ruthlessness, To leave emcees lachrymose,
Y'all emcees remain a toothless mess, Being burned in the tracks of Helios,
And i'm a scary ghost,
Your teeth are ruthless and leave mcs sad,
mcs are toothless messes, burned by the greek sun god
I am a ghost.
Also not all mcs are as shitty as they appear, usually anyone whose doing 'art' is an inherently lazy person. Just because someone isn't shading between the lines doesn't mean they can't or are unable.
Anyway on that note I can't tell if your backmasking your voice and such for a reason other than that because theres something wrong with it in real life that you feel you need to hide your identity or some shit but imo just maybe amplify/normalize/add-fast-attack +db to it and maybe not try to distort but just focus on keeping it clear and understandable. But the first part had no static so I don't think its the mic. So assuming this is hip hop we're talking about it than I would just work on keeping the vocals clear.
Its like your wrote it with this in mind:
This is better then the hype track, but the vocs need some severe amping. The flow is very consistent and other then a few minor slips it was pretty well on beat. Thank you for not writing backwards :D
Decent lyrics, but you sound like Stephen Hawking.
Better than sounding like he can't rap.