Flow needs work, probs see if you can EQ your voice a bit better, but the lyrics sound pretty solid. Just work on it and kill it next year man :)
I was going to hype and take part in the ClapTrap competition coming up. I had some verses in my head so I kinda put them together lazily. Mad respect to the amount of effort that goes into organizing this stuff. This was a bit embarrassing for me as obviously havent got a rapper voice and havent rapped before to anything but an eminem song.
Flow needs work, probs see if you can EQ your voice a bit better, but the lyrics sound pretty solid. Just work on it and kill it next year man :)
I would have equalized, but basically gave up half way through. Definitely going to give it a go next year though
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