I really like the music, howevver, you used too much effect and didn't sing confidently enough for me to accurately judge your voice. I actually thought you were trolling with a Vocaloid at first.

Sing a bit louder, because in ths song you sound like the only sober guy at a party who's being brought into the drunken singing. Like I said the music in itself was pretty good, and it has earned my interest. Write a new song, or just sing this one again (but louder) and upload it, so we here at Newgrounds can actually take a listen at that voice o' your's.