The first three minutes of the song are super catchy and has a unique "dope" use of er....tunes (haha ^~^") for the melody. However, the tune playing the main melody of this part is a little over-whelmingly high for my ears/head compared to the rest of the tune. Maybe if it was toned down a little bit.
However, between 3-5minutes, I'm not sure how to comment because it isn't really my style of music that I favor. But I do agree that it from 3 to 6:10-ish minutes it did seem a bit repetitive to disinterest. Without reading your description, it is a bit hard for me to imagine anything but visualizations I've seen of people...(more like "Pikachu--) on acid.
Otherwise, I like a variety of your music though.