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This is another original piece by me. It was brought on by a fit of my OCD go figure. I spent alot of time and I do not know if it will appease to you new grounds. So here it is for you all. Reviews and votes are always welcome. I am just glad to provide this music for everyone to listen to. Have a great day newgrounds much love all.

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--The Critique--
Alright I'll start at, 0.42 I feel that the "Buzzing" is too noticeable at this point. And could probably be cut out for that part as by 0.52 its already gone. However Its still nice for a transition... So If I may recommend Fading it in rather than letting it come on so strong in the intro.
I feel 1.25, 1.49, and 2.36 hit a bit hard. It comes on just too loudly from the rest of the song... Placing something like that in the background of a video game is tough. So is the Sound at 1.10 but That plays a nice contribution to the song so it can be worked around.
-The Praise-
Loved the Solo intro, Nice and smooth. Helps the feel of transitioning. 0.57 - 1.24 and 1.26 - 1.48 That is an Awesome tune. I Wouldn't worry about it getting to repetitive it carries lots of energy and is very easy to place in a wide array of scenarios. The Song can be easily Looped and thats always useful for this Genre. Did I mention that was an amazing tune? heh... Sorry couldn't resist... it is tho...

Overall. This is a Great track. Definitively shows your talent. Keep up the good work... And the nice thing about NGs is that we're pretty open to all genres of music so don't be afraid to post stuff.

CMusicrun responds:

Thank your for the review. This really does help alot and I much appreciate the time you took to write this. It will really help in furthering my correction to my mastering style and hopefully it will alow me to start adding vocals to my tracks now. I will get this remastered and update this as soon as I can.

Credits & Info

CMusicrun
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Downloads
40
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Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 15, 2012
1:44 AM EST
Genre
Video Game
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
3 min 2 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.