Sorry man but this track has no....ambient in it whatsoever...
I mean i dont know where to start...
Your vocals are way off with the main padlines and leads ( i think i heard leads)
Also the mixing...ah the mixing...so much of it need to be done.
The vocal track is overbearing..it crackles and is generally unpleasant. (I mean im not trying to make fun of your singing or anything)
But hey thats just my opinion man...
Remember with a little extra work you can always improve your act.
Good luck man :L
formermom 
