The mix and the quality aren't that great, but really... you've definitly showed your ideas! And they are great! Good and original riffs.. dude, you need better stuff to record! Just like me, I've got so many ideas, but no guitar skills at all, so I use synthesizer guitars, which just kill all the feeling in my songs. But yeah, as long as I can show my ideas to the world I'm okay with that. And the same for you I guess. Anyway: amazing song! In my opionion, a breakdown towards the end would do no harm ;)
Hey thanks for the review! Yeah, I made this song in about 2-3 hours with all computer generated fake instruments. And the songs I actually DO record, I don't really get a lot of time to do real recording and when I do, they aren't the best takes, but I don't mind. I was actually listening to your song before and thought it was really good. Keep it up!