that was really good. lot's a feel and a really good balance of shred and emotion in the solo's. let me know if you want to throw vocals on this track. just go to my profile to see my many vocal styles.
cheers and looking forward to hearing more
Author Comments
DeafMetalz for your ear pussiez! If anyone wants to throw vocals on this be my guest! Just shoot me a message.
-Jon
Always love your energy and style!!!!!
Hope I can get my shit up to this level of quality.....
I'm a bass player at heart and now aquired the 6 string Kramer striker II as a new tool to learn and get my over-all skillz up and over the top!!!
Nice piece of material love the tightness of your work.
Maybe you could give me some pointers as to my new ambition on the guitar..
Later..JQ
Metaljonus responds:
Thanks! Kramers are nice guitars!
\m/
Epic, I wish I could shred like that.
Also, you asked about the mix in to BMI's response, so I'm gonna give you my take, although it might just be personal preference, but a thought is better than none I say!
I think the rhythm guitars could have been brought ever so slightly (And I do mean just a hair) closer to the front of the track. And while I enjoy a good kick to the head, the kick I think is (again) every so slightly too loud (Again, by just a hair).
That aside, brutally awesome!
Metaljonus responds:
Noted and done! Thanks for the input!! \m/
Earspooge
Dude, those pinches were dirty hooker boots at 1:05. Damn near wet my shorts. haha.
Awesome shit, man. Pretty much par for the course with Metaljonus.
What can I say that I haven't said over and over, without ACTUALLY sucking your wang.
5 up, biatch.
Current Score
4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.091)
Metaljonus responds:
Thanks! How is the mix? Send me a message and let me know! I need more help with the mixing and mastering. Just some critique I guess.....
Awsome
~~REVIEW~~
OK so your first piece of 2012 cool, was wondering when you were gonna submit something new, and here we have, and thats some awsome guitar playing very solid playing and kicking, this was pretty good and could go very well with some vocals. so maybe thats something to throw in there at some point, for the mostpart of it, it was awsome glad i popped onto your profile randomly this morning, anyways keep up the awsome work, im hoping to hear more of your great guitar playing.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest this is great as it is, it stands on its own just fine, onlything suggestion for any kind of improving might be, adding some vocals, even getting a female vocal on this would be pretty tight.
Metaljonus responds:
Thanks dude! It is my first post of 2012, I did'nt even realize that. Can't go wrong with some brutal shit to start off the year. I plan on doing vocals probably with my vocalist from my band just to do a test run with mixing vocals and other stuff. I'll post it when it is done. Thanks for the review mang!
-Jon
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- 2 min 36 sec
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