You have some nice backbeats
but I think HeartOfTheStorm is right. This needs some breakdown and a kickin melody to bring it all together
It's great background music for a building moment in something where there might be dialogue. Does it feel like some trance I'd often enjoy listening to? Almost, but not quite. If you want something more impressive, I can only offer that you could break away from that monotone synth at points, reach a climax, break it down, change the pace and/or stretch the wings with some ridiculous transition. That's only if this isn't finished.
There was a lot more I wanted to do but I didn't want to keep on working on it cause I was afraid I would keep on editing. Though, it has been bugging me to finish it. I have been experimenting with monotone sounds and subtractive synthesis lately and wanted to take the opportunity to do something awesome in this song. Thanks for the feedback.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.