Duuuude...

That's a kickass tune. Could have used a melodic piano track (with a radio filter on it). But who's complaining? Very nice...

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nice man...

i like this ...not to bad bro just keep practin..i would like to remix this

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Woah......

This is real intense. The only thing I'd change is the snare. It didn't really fit the rest of the song. BTW I like this gothic theme you got goin here. I see a lot of potential in you homie.

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pretty good

Would be cool to hear it with some lyrics, and shit. But cool tune nonetheless.
It had a dark feel to it, that is coo..Here is a 5 from my headbangin ass