Awesome song, man! It's very catchy and soothing. You did a great job! Keep up the good work! :D
The overall progression of the piece is well done. The instrumentation is spot on, though I was thinking that something else was going to double over the harp plucking other than the clarinet, like a piano or something. Structurally, everything about this is solid. It would just add a lot more dimension and flavor if you added some effects like reverb and echo to make it sound not as dry. It might also help to variate on the loudness of some parts because to me all the instruments sounded like they were at the same volume and so their sounds meshed together and nothing really stood out. It's like you've got the perfect bread and turkey but adding lettuce, tomato, and condiments would make the sandwich better. Anyways, great work!
Thank you for the thoughtful review! i plan to improve on these kinds of aspects in the future,as right now i have my hands full with other works im doing. i will eventually come back and remaster this. thanks again! :]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.