Definitely has potential.
Overall, it changes just enough to stay fresh and exciting through the song. Rising action had me worried for a moment, until the drop around the first minute mark.
After the first drop, I was expecting another bass or something deeper to come in. Right now, the song really needs some depth to it. The multiple layers and complex melodic rifts are a really good start (like REALLY good), but it still sounds flat.
Either a lower kick or (even better) a pulsing bass-line would do wonders.
I was actually considering to have an intense bass drop after the build up at the start, but since I'm using Linux Multimedia Studio, it's a lot harder to have something like that (I was thinking about making it a dubstep track, because that's what it sounds like when you hear the start).
It took me a long time to try and perfect the start, and then I worked on the rest. Maybe sometime in the future I'll turn this into a dubstep track once I figure out how to produce dubstep.
Thank you for your input :)
Nice track here, i liked it
hmm ok so this one is notbad, it has good "QUALITY" to it and you do mix it up abit its very sharp thats something i always look for with these pieces, so nice job there, and i do hear some other sounds in there wich is cool and really comesout in this track and seems to all come together, now as for improving points, im not too sure, as this seems pretty solid if you ask me, anyways great stuff here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think this is just right as is, i woulding take away or add anything, good job.
Hey thanks man :) I always love comment and critic.
Well this is my first remix, personally I'm not overly happy with the result (I know it could be a whole lot better) but I'm still learning about making electronic music.
I'm planning on releasing a whole album of stuff, some remixes and some original (going to explore more dubstep). Hopefully my next track will have a better outcome.
Thank you for your input it's greatly appreciate :)