Good Try
The intro has potential, but after the 1 minute mark...meh
You had a build up but no real climax. IMO the song got stale after you looped at 2 min
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So this song doesn't have that many hours of work in it. In general it was pretty easy to write once I got past the intro, I don't think this is my best work, but I think it's good. So tell me what you think and such, I love feedback. Like, I -love- feedback.
Sincerely,
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Good Try
The intro has potential, but after the 1 minute mark...meh
You had a build up but no real climax. IMO the song got stale after you looped at 2 min
Will work on it, hopefully improve to point of quality. Also, I love your name
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.