Woah. That's one GREAT loop. :)
Reminds me of Bibio and Floating Points.
I'd say the tempo is good, but soften it up a bit and add some variation. :)
Speed this up, change some stuff and WOW, this would be funky! Like previously said, tons of potential in this one :D. Glad to see that you're still improving.
This has tons of potential dude!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.