Welp, you wanted a review so I'll gives ya one :D Good stuff, your mic sounds good so whichever program your using its compensating for it. The bings at 0:36 and 1:40 in the background were a little distracting. I would suggest either writing out your script rather than improvising or just go over it a couple of times before laying down your tracks. The pauses and stuttering in certain spots sounded just a little bit unnatural. A couple of sound effects of the guy moving around when he is getting really angry or just in general will help it flow a little better as a scene as well. Also, really let the guy freak out and scream loud! But other than that, great stuff and sounds good!