The sounds are too loud and grainy. There is too many heavy and dark sound around each other so it just sounds like a bunch of noise. It need variety in terms of pitches and frequencies.
The drums I like hear some bongos or something in there, that is cool.
But it's a scary track overall...
I didn't pay attention to how this song sounds in high volume(created-uploaded on night time). I totally Agree with you, It needs A LOT of mastering.
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