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Summer Song (See this?)

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Line up:
Nedak -Guitar, vocals, bass, producing

Thegluestickman-Drums

http://thegluestickman.ne wgrounds.com/

It isn't perfect, but for my first fully finished song I feel like it will do. If you feel like you could master it better than myself, please feel free to contact me.

All criticism appreciated.

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NekoMika

2011-11-22 11:22:32

Great collab

Really love how this comes together. Kind of reminds me of older bands as well with weird music videos to go with their music too. Your vocals sound great though. The tune feels pretty good although there are mine mess ups. You make me think of the singer from Tool too so that's nice.

The guitar sounds smooth here except when transitioning to the chorus. Mostly since it sounds like you may have accidentally hit an additional note when transitioning on this one. The bass sounds smooth here and has a nice solid rhythm with it.

The drums here sound really nice and he sounds like a great drummer too. The guitar solo was nice, kind of slow but very smooth on the ears.

Overall ,great rock song collab.

MakerThe

2011-11-22 10:53:58

Great Sound!

I love the sound of this song and especially the vox. Lofi the way it should be. That being said you should really take some more time on this. I would really love this song if all that sloppy timing got out of the way.

Nedak responds:

Thanks of the review. I feel like most of the timing issues is towards the end. If you can other hear major parts let me know.

cjsnow1

2011-11-15 21:15:38

Love the vox.

Reminds me of a cross between Jerry Cantrell (of AIC Fame), Travis Meeks (Days Of The New), and a touch of Layne Staley (RIP).

Nice job man. I especially liked the solo. Got any lyrics? (For clarification to make sure I'm hearing words that are actually there.)

Nedak responds:

Thanks a lot man.

Lyrics:
-Verse 1-
I don't care where you're going to be, and I don't care where you are.
and I don't care where it takes us to
where it starts, I don't know, don't know.

-chorus-
Why can't you see me? I can't see anything at all.
I choked on your breeze.
I can't see anything at all.

-Verse 2-
It takes us far away from here
to the Island of Broken Dreams
the land survives on your heart
and on its blackness it will feed (it feeds, it feeds)