Off to a good start
This is very well made so far, but I would suggest making the melody slightly more complex and not so attached to the beat if you know what I mean. That might grab the listener's attention better, if that's what you're looking to do. 4/5 from me.
yea i know what you mean.. i was just tryin to make a song that would appeal to the newgrounds audience. a lot of the techno i would listen to would have this kind of melody, but they make it more powerful and energetic. iono? i'm still not done with this yet so i'll see how if goes with a different pattern for the melody. thanks for your review!
loved it dude, make it longer
It definetly kept my atention. Maybe a stronger kick. Also you need to work on your mastering - that is the key. Because at least on my sound station it didn't sound too good. But you Definetly have potential. LOVE the piano.
thanks ak! yea my speakers suck ass right now.. i needa get some better ones.
i don't really know all this music making jargon so.. maybe you can explain... mastering.
It needs a fast off beat synth, kind of hard sounding almost distorted. u could arpegiate the key note too. that would bring out some more tune.
yea i need something to catch the listener's attention.. kinda suck em in and make them listen to the song. thanks for the input cobalt!
You are one of my new favorite techno artists
I'm not talking about newgrounds either. You're right up there with Toby Emerson! I wish I could write music like that!
P.S. I dig that i2 tag, you put on all your tracks. very original! ^_^
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wow. i'm someone's favorite!!!! WOOO!!!!! haha. thanks man. i'll check it out now. =)