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Bones - (Vocals)

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VOCALS. Yes, I know. They aren't the greatest, but that's cause I had a change mics halfway through the project. I did my best.

Any feedback is really helpful. If you hate it, please let me know why so i can improve. I worked really hard to get the effects on this, but it just doesn't have that full quality of typical pop songs.

Thanks again for listening!! <3

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You are amazing

I do love your voice, miss. The song is good, all though the mixing is the only thing keeping it from a 10. Bass drums too high, not enough reverb. Get some better synths or samples, like I said. Or at least get a good mic! You have so much potential. The chords are right on, and your musical sense is truly displayed here.

Pretty great

Hmm, I don't normally see a song considered "Pop" here on Newgrounds. That's new LOL. It's pretty good song actually even though I'm not too into pop hehe. Anyways, it has a nice melody and you have a good voice. I also think the synths sound great too but the bass drum is kind of...loud. It's not too bad or anything. Also I don't know about the microphone you used but it sounds like a little computer microphone I guess. It doesn't sound so clear compared to a more professional microphone that's made for singing. Great song anyways! :D

auroalee1 responds:

haha, Yeah, it a computer mic. :) it's the only thing I had when I was writting, and when I tried to do it on an actual mic, I just ouldn't sing it the same way I had before. Anyway, I tried to cover it up by adding layers and other vocal effects.

Kinda reminds me of dubstep

Unique dubstep

Bass drum definitely should be turned down a tad
The vocals and synth seem to be the main focus in the song which is good
The vocals sound meshy and distant
So unless you plan on making them cleaner with more presence, then I suggest working with the "distance" feel and make the vocals sound further or staticy like a radio

Also, the intro needs work
It's too abrupt?
Not really sure what it is but it could use a touch-up

Horay for vocals!

I think the bass drum is a little heavy and the vocals a bit quiet. I like the build up at 0:33, it was unexpected and added some much needed depth to the song. The panning in this is nice too and adds some fullness. The actual singing of the vocals sounds fairly good, but it just seems a bit distant and quite. Possibly some equalizing could fix that. The song structure is good and stops it from ever getting repetetive. I think a better start to the song would be the vocals on their own, or something to give them a bit more presence. You definitely have something nice going on here, good luck with your future stuff!

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Votes
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Score
4.37 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 11, 2011
3:46 PM EST
Genre
Pop
File Info
Song
2.1 MB
2 min 18 sec

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