I arive as a force against the DaD force (D-chain and Da-chibi)
I say it was ok, not amazing but ok. I think the funny thing is my favorite part was the very start.
"Good Start:)" quite litteraly hasa good start. Im not much of a music making guy so idk much about programs and sound packages but I liked that calliope sounding thing that is present throughout and most pronounced at the start. All in all for your first song Id have to say [song title]

i join my force

with Da-Chibi
tho, the piano in between all the distotion and wrong settings is nice!

You can do it!

To be honest. This is some pretty gawd awful trance music... if you can call it trance, or even music for that matter. I guess it is a matter of preferance, but I say keep trying. I belive in you.