good, but still missing a lot.

Alright this song was pretty good, as far as it went.
you had a good background beat and a good baseline but your frontside synth was nonexistent, literally it did not exist.

But now for the review,

In your originality score I gave you an six, that was because even if you wrote it yourself, it was repetitive background. Nothing very special.

In diversity I gave you another six. As I said before it was repetitive, but it was a nice mix of instruments.

In clarity I gave you an eight, it was easy to hear the notes and not at all hard to tell what was what, also the sounds didn't bleed together or fuzz out. So you did a pretty good job in clarity.

Effort deserved a 7, you did put effort and all but you really didn't do much in the way of diversity... I mean it was the same set of notes repeted over and over again, repititivly with minor changes.

All in all it was about a six work. not the worst I have heard, but definatly not the best. Next version of this,(if you make one) add a frontside synth and it will be worth about from an 8 to a 10 work, this is a good solid base at least, now try to build on it.