The medium part i dont understand. Why you breaking structure

Needs moar bass.

I agree with the person beneath me. Right after the short kick buildup you could do something really grimy and bass-y. Seriously it is really good. Downloading all of your songs now for iPoddage.

Verrry nice

As the guy below me (as gay as that may sound) implied, what really shines about this track is the mastering - that thing that I'm not good at :) - and you show an excellent insight in placing lil' effects and details.

But I think this should have a meaner beat - bassier and gnawier, as a contrast with the ambient feel.

It still rules and deserves 5/5, but it could be, like, excellent. Hope I'm not being too cryptic.

I also would like to inappropriately ask you to listen to some more of my stuff, because you gave me two very detailed and helpful reviews and I want some goddamn fame 'round here. If I could persuade to review "Aeronaut", "Exit Moscow" and "Black Samurai waltz", I'd be very happy. I consider those my finest work at the moment and I'm eager to improve. Hope to hear from you, I'm off to listen to more of your songs now :)

Pretty Good

But you won't get away without some of my "music theory bitching".
Genre bitching.
Don't take it as any offense or anything (read the text with a friendly voice), but I'm pretty fed up with people who submit non-techno tracks into the techno section. If people submitted techno only into the techno section, there would be 500 tracks maximum.
You guessed it, this is not techno... It's more like a mix of jungle (which goes to the drums and bass section) and ambient trance (which DOES go to the ambient section).
This portal needs more genres, and genres that gives every track a home.
And genre moderation.

But the track dammit, I'm acting like I'm starting a damn forum thread.
The composing and arranging conquers 70% of the AP people.
The mixing and mastering put you over 80% of them.

The sound production and synth programming vastly n00bifies 98% of the AP producers...

Also, more automations n' shit than in certain of my tracks.

Tell me... Tell my what you use to create these. You might've said it before, but my memory is pretty fucked.

(Techno is music based on drums, inharmonic, smooth, repetive and very percussive (Trance nor jungle is a subgenre of techno (don't do it again (excuse me (it's still good (:D (Very good)))))))

Tome ^^

I love the beepy, arpy effect the last 2/4 before the bass chord pad comes in.

god

it makes me feel like you should have finish it. but it was good