that's very nice!

nice job, man!

Sweet!

Awesome atmostphere, loved your overall feel!
I got one thing though, when you get down to the beat at 1:25, you could use something extra in the beginning. Perhaps a pad or subtle submelody. Perhaps some small hits every now and then. Just to keep it more full and thus more interesting.
Don't have any complaints about the rest, I guess, I loved your arps, strings, pads, the piano melodies were nice and smooth, great use of filtering, your kick was crisp, clap could perhaps use some eq'ing, but it was nice nonetheless.
LOVED your pad at 3:47, awesomeawesomeawesome. I like how piano melody smootly kicks in, you really gave it a good trance feel man!
Nice going getting back to the chorus after that buildup, great work placing that piano melody in for variation! I kept being amazed by your sweeps down, they just sound so fitting.
I loved your whole buildoff, you did great how you built off the piano there in the outro, and again, great pads and strings.
Well, hardly any critics at all, I loved it, great trance atmosphere, nice instrumentation, good use of effects, great work man!
5/5, keep it up! Looking forward to hearing some more!