The timing was off, the singing was awful, and the music was just bad...
Here's a star for making me LMAO though! =)
I Kinda think you put very little effort in your song there becasue you seeem to be just putting any songs together. You need a singer too.
Dude, to be honest, that is the worst singing voice I have ever heard. Maybe if you work on your singing, then work on your guitar playing, you could be alright, but until then, don't put your songs on here.