Dark Matter (to be continued)

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this one kicks, even in its unfinished state.


You better respond

Or I'll cry.

lol, anyways, to the review.

I like the beginning. But I'm kind of wondering where you could go with this song, since i think its a bit too 'subtle' for me.
The whole soft arp and kick thing, ya know.

The whole white noise you have going with the bassline is very nice, but it sounds off tune everyonce and a while with the little arp you hav ein the backround?
I dunno, it just sounds like that.

I like your drum work, but i don't really like how your drum breaks are very simply put: Drum breaks.
Theres so synth work or anything when the drums are breaking in and out and all that. Don't get me wrong, i like the kick rolls and the beat breaks. I'd just like to see it sound a little more like it has a flow to it.

Overall, i like it, it reminds me of a NES soundtrack or something :D

Good work man, keep it up!


attemptedperfection responds:

I could've sworn I had already written a long, detailed response to this... friggin' NewGrounds... anyway, thanks much for the thoughtful input and constructive criticism; I was worried that there was some synth clashing, but I'll try to fix the issue and clean it up a bit for the final version. I'll also be adding a nice, low, rythmic bass-line.

Thanks again for the review!


I liked it very much. The quiet voice in the start sounds good. And the saw like thing is also quite good. But what i loved in this was the drumbeat. Rock on!
Ps. Review some of my songs!

attemptedperfection responds:

muchas gracias.

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Credits & Info

3.57 / 5.00

Feb 27, 2006
9:37 PM EST
File Info
1.7 MB
2 min 18 sec

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