u never fail to please my ears

if it was possible i would give this song a 6/5 great job man keep up the good work!:)

Soulful

Amazing... I loved it! It seemed like something from an anime cartoon or something. Good job!

O_o

W007 Vote Five!
+Fav!
HardCore! Its Good!
Its music like this that can inspire you so much!
Thnx for makin this!
Yo Keep It up!

YES!

The beat is really catchy(like all ur songs) and makes me wanna dance. Everything flows nicely and it sounds great on my home theater system. make more like it!

Nice stirngs

I believe that for the volume of the strings and the piano, turn down the hi hat. It cuts through everytihg in the song... it kinda invadeif you knw what I mean.
When you break into the saw melody, I thinking it should be turned down a bit, then thrown up an octave.
And when you have that big break down, I think that would the perfect time to make a melody that matches the piano with that big saw lead, ad make it filter in, maybe as an arp.
Work on drama a little bit more, more snare rolls, open hi hats, rides, and put a compressor on the master channel FX.
Then, if you put too many patterns together, they will distort. Then you have be choosy about your arrangment, or else everything will sound horrible.
Everything is kind of crowded, turn down the volume on some things, add patterns here, take some away, etc.
Good work, but needs improvement. But then again, do't we all? Keep it up! =D