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KFL Doodle #4 "Centre Mass"

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I did spend quite a bit of time on this actually. I couldn't really extend it beyond what it is now though; everything after the fact seemed redundant and "latched on". It's fine how it is but I'm annoyed that there wasn't more I could put into it.

If you can be fucked to give me any feedback, please be as harsh as possible. I need to keep my ego under control before it escapes and eats my family.

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I'm here to kill your ego.

Just kidding. Cool breakbeat and textures that lead into a pretty enjoyable ride. The distorted lows are always welcome. I'm used to hearing the arpeggios or synth motifs lead an intro rather than the breakbeat itself. Even the bare beat at the end (2:09) could have been worked into the beginning I think. Also, I do this myself from time to time...but I think the mood of the piece shifted from a darker Jesper Kyd kind of feel to a more ecstatic arcade feel...which is cool, but to me your train of thought was obviously derailed. That's the way I like it, though. Keep up the great work.

Afterfall responds:

That mood change wasn't intentional. I'm not sure if you are saying that's a good thing or a bad thing, but is definitely there haha.

Once again, I really appreciate your review, its a bit surreal to be given feedback from someone who I really look up to as a musician. And you always have interesting things to say in your critiques as well.

Nice!

Sorry, but I might have to inflate your ego a bit. This song seemed to sound like a techno sort of song at times. Then, it developed an unsteady edge to it, and then included a classical, flowing sort of sound. I really enjoyed this! The only thing I would change was that the sort of intro was a tiny bit too long for me. Also, you could of possibly changed up the techno sort of sound in the background up a bit in the middle of the piece (although, that's just my personal opinion). Well done! Please keep publishing music on Newgrounds!

Afterfall responds:

Hmm maybe this does fit with techno, rather than "Miscellaneous" lol...

Yes, the intro is horrendously long, but I wanted to almost drag it out so it was longer then you actually wanted to hear it, so when the melody and chords changed and opened up near the end it's much more satisfying.

You are definitely right about the lack of change though, there is too much that simply has no motion throughout the entire piece, which makes everything sound rather dry. The intro probably would have been more listenable with one off sounds that come in and out, or sounds that change and move over time.

I'm glad you like it though! :)

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Aug 22, 2011
9:47 AM EDT
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5.5 MB
2 min 25 sec

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