Overall, not terrible.
Like I said, it wasn't terrible, but it didn't make me go "wow!" either. The music in the song was good. The pace of the music had a very definite attitude, but your voice on the other hand, did not. You went in and out of the pace a multitude of times, and your voice isn't that strong to begin with, so every change was noticeable. Verse 3 especially bugged me. You nearly silenced the music to get a solo on your voice, which made me sad. The music made the song and took away most of the problems occurring from your voice. It was unsatisfactory to say the least, because the music was your veil. Your voice doesn't make me cringe, certainly no, but it's nothing that can go on solos. The lyrics were fine, but they were nothing that hasn't been said or done before.
Conclusion: Keep your voice with the pace, keep your voice with the music. The lyrics are fine for wooing the crowds, but if you can find something more... original. Than you will be a better artist. --Nightmarish