Well this was a very happy industrial song...
I liked it overall... it was kind of cliched and boring at some parts though. I loved the way the lead voice was. It sounded so whiny, but in a good way... like a lively way xD. I would dispute this being industrial, though o-O
Thanks for the comment!! I really appreciate it. Yap, the song is indeed quite boring - I totally agree with that, but I was tired, it was late at night, so I just finished where I was and posted.
I don't really know if this is industrial. Very beautiful and poppy, though! No complaints except it is very short and doesn't really evolve into anything very different then how it begins. You probably wanted it that way, but it makes it a little boring after 1:10 - which than the song ends anyway. If you wanted to expand it into a full song, I think at 1:10 you should completely take the song in a new direction. Keep it up!
Thank you for your review! I don't really know much about the industrial genre, which explains why the song probably is put into this category.
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the tip!