The intro is cool.
It sounds really awesome in the beginning. I like how the drums come in with the synth. While I don't generally like dupstep, this has such an awesome feel to it... How it goes up and down with the wobbles feels quite good. I like the custom wobbles you made as well. However, for a dubstep it lacks something. Sub-bass. Needs a sub-bass, please, for the dubstep bit. Unfortunately though, there's a bit of off-key-ness from 1:14 onwards in the higher synth that's kind of doing the melody. Like how it comes back in at 1:37 to the previous wobble bit. However. My problems...
It's really rambling, there isn't much formatting. I was thinking, when it got to the third part starting at 1:00, "why isn't there a theme?" There needs to be some kind of theme that people can latch onto. The other thing is that there isn't an outro, it just ends. That's disappointing with a track like this.
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There is a sub bass during the dubstep parts, but I'm new to sub basses and haven't quite figured out how to bring them into the mix. Thank you for your honesty, I will do better next time.
To be honest with the other dubsteps I have heard this one just sounds pretty mediocre to my ears anyways. No true popping out or sudden changes really .It kind of just started and then automatically switched over to it. On a less related note I think I heard a cat's meow in there too. Weird.
The dub sounds are alright and not too dramatic anyways. The synth sounds nice and seems to have an after echo and some chorus that comes to it too. The bass is wet and nice here I think as well. The drums are still pretty cool and have an amazing rhythm here.
Overall, just not exciting enough I think.
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Alright thank you, I will try and make my next song more dynamic.
Simple and just fine dubstep track, but I don't feel like it brings anything now to the genre at all.
It's a bit repetitive towards the end, the wobbles are pretty good and I do like the minor drops. It's nothing too heavy, more friendly to the ear than a lot of the dubstep on NG. Nice intro building up to the track, which is most always a good thing.
The synth for the melody is pretty good, especially during the drops, love the sound with that buzz to it.
But what pulls this track down for me is that it's nothing new, and it gets rather dull towards the end.
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I have that problem a lot, I start off taking my time with a song and by the end of it I'm so sick that I tend to become lazy and just loop things, oops. My patience is growing however, so I don't think this will be as much of a problem in my future songs. Thank you for the review!
Takes a while to pick up, but most of the beginning lacks rhythm or direction, after that when the wub wubs start the song picks up and gets better. This track is alright by me, but not great.
Well thank you, I'll work harder on my next song.