What is good: first beat, first half of song, choice of bass loops.
Improvements: Make the song build up to the end, change or keep beggining beat, keep that same strong bass brum kick in the beggining in 4/4 time through out the whole song, mix this song up or remix it.
This song is very good those are just suggestions how to remix or improve this already creative song. i think i have the same music maker as you too, lol. Because i have some of the same loops on my system. Anyways, good job. Keep working hard.
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