I feel like im in an rpg
and im about to go to the armor scrafter and buy some sick shit. Its very peaceful, the chord progression you used. THe harp/clav synth thing you used for the melody sounded like somthign strait out of final fantasy. I liked the drums. strings were a nice touch
Overall volme was too low,nedded more diversity
yay, more relaxing tunes ^^.
I can hear this in so many games, it suits perfectly into the quiet village life. Its simplestic, yet I have absolutely no quarral with it, it flows incredibly well.
When you added those strings in the background, I was quite pleased, it sounded marvelous.
I would reconsider the percussional work. I think it should be more steady, and you should remove that crash, or use it very sparingly. It would add a neat flavour, but when you use it to that degree, it will lose its flavour and become a hindrance to the song.
I would HIGHLY recommend quick shaker notes, you know like (TS-ts-TS-ts-TS-ts-TS-ts), in the majority of the song. Heh, I hope you understood what I was trying to say.
I am myself trying to learn how to make this type of music, great stuff Aephion, you did another good piece of work ^^. I hope one day we can do a collab.
I would absolutely love to do a collaboration some time ^_^
I'll send you an email, so then you'll have mine too ^_^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.