Very nice work bro!
I really like what you've thrown together here.
The melodies are very entrancing, and the break at 0:52 Is sounds pretty stellar!
I Really dig the subtle undertones, and general ambiance.
I Also really give you props on how well you've automated all of your fade-ins and outs/ other effects.
Couple things definately need some attention here though:
- The bass sample is way to "small" sounding up until the break at 2:35 (Try layering a few bass samples together, and blend them nicely for a nice full bass)
- The bass also seemed to linger in a few spots where it shouldn't have; the break at 1:24 could have been a lot more epic if the bass had followed the same dynamic movement of everything else.
- Mastering makes e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g better with trance music; I definitely would like to hear a full mastered version of this...
- Watch your lows bro; eq some stuff out majorly, and make sure you're side-chaining everything you need to ;)
- things got kinda repetitive at the end. :p
Great work though dude! This is definitely coming along nicely. :D
~Dj Sonik