No... You're wrong.
Sorry, pal, but I speak Japanese. Akatsuki literally translates to Red Moon. Aka = noun form of red, tsuki = moon.
Now, to the actual review!
Intro:
Reminds me of Tiesto or Armin van Buuren, both of which are good things. I like the piano chording, and the build ups. The saw-square sounding synth that came in at 0:55 seems out of place to my ears. Note wise and soundwise. Didn't really fit the rest of the synths.
I like the break at 1:22. The piano gets more complex and it's tranquil.
High hat TOO LOUD! If you do your mix right, you don't have to have the hat even half that volume. It'll pierce through, it's one of the highest sounds in a mix. Ever.
I like the gated pad that you have near the end.
Umm... I dunno, mix up the build up. I could tell you just had one build up that you used over and over again whenever you wanted a climax type thing. It got boring after the second or third time.
8/10, 4/5
AustinHayes 
