I like the idea of this, kind of a dwarven feel to it, however you need to be really careful with note spacings and velocities. It sounds very much like something you'd hear on Runescape. I don't know if that was intentional, but for me, I prefer something a bit more real sounding. But don't be disheartened, your musical ideas are there, and are good!
woah, didnt see this comment here. and yeah, i didnt know what to do alot of the time working the middle section before it goes back to the main theme, and it kind of shows. i think the fake hint must have came from these plugins i use that cut off the sound from the first note when playing a new note. but yeah, i guess eight is the score i'd end up giving it. thanks for the consideration! :)