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Sounding great at the moment. Try messing with the guitar. It needs to be a bit thicker. Add a harmony or some incidentals to fill up the song. Keep it up man!
5/5 8/10
Author Comments
Yeah, I was bored. :p Don't ttake this seriously. My friend wanted me to try to make a completely electronic industrial song much like KMFDM. So yeh, I'm not a pro at this hahah. But I do like it, and I'm gonna try to actually make this work, so it's a {WIP} now ;D
....heh
i dont listen to a lot of industrial but i listen enough to know that this is not industrial. its nice but not industrial. i would say it has potential though. on that metal instrument you have there add a little reverb and make the release softer and drag out a little. try and give the drums more depth and add a few more patterns while your at it. you might want to try and time out the entrances of that metal instrument as well.
this song has almost a crazy robot war prep kinda feel its nice :)
TechnicolourNuance responds:
Have you listened to KMFDM or Rob Zombie or even the Smashing Pumpkins? :p The bass might not have been industrial, but I tried.xD Industrial isn't purely electronic-.-
ANyways. Thanks for the advice. I'mma update with my band and see if I can add the bass in. :3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKxosf l1E2g
(KMFDM - Juke-Joint Jezebel)
That is so cool.
I like it even though it wasn't what I expected. If you want a bass to not wobble, turn the attack down on the two main oscillators.
Not Industrial :P
You've got some dubstep, hard rock, a little bit of everything in there lol.
TechnicolourNuance responds:
Hahaha. Thank you. :3 I wasn't trying to go for dubstep Dx I messed up the bass and it became all wubby :<
But I was trying to go for the KMFDM and Rob Zombie style haha. Oh well. Thanks. xD
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