Experimental on my behalf.
Instead of going bass kick first, the loop initiates on the snare. This seems to make the instruments time onto the drums with more freshness as it is not parallel with the bass kick.

I tried adding a long ass build up for like, the first time. I couldn't find the "right" sound to use, so I went through my dubstep bass additive sounds. Which are less meaty and light sounding.
The build lasts 44 seconds @_@

I sampled from the "Angry Kid" video on youtube.
And used one of Pepper's sfx for the "Uh!"

Let me know what you think.
http://soundcloud.com/raw green/