A bit repetitive

It sounds very much like a boss battle of some sort, but when it just winds over and over through the same sections over and over, it just doesn't make it as a boss battle theme. It needs a tune to come in!

I'm not suggesting you copy it, but maybe if you listen to some of the classic Final Fantasy Battle/Boss themes, you'll see what I mean.

They come in, similar to yours (but a little bit faster, with those tense-building background parts), and then they'll come in with a tune, that just fits in with the repetitive structure for a little bit, and then the whole structure will change every once in a while, and add a whole new tune.

You did a good job, with what you have so far, and i'm going to download it for learning purposes. (I still don't have down fast, battle type music, and i'd like to get better with them). But I really want to see a nice tune come in with a newer version!! :D 8/10 and 4/5.

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Hmmm...

I could imagine this in a miniboss battle- actually I think it would fit a big or final boss better. This is really dramatical :) It loops well, too.
Nice addition with the guitar, it makes the sound of it much better. There was nice drums on this, too.
I couldn´t catch any melodies in this, though.

BLARGH!

This isn't the style that your good at. I suggest sticking with ambient and drum and bass. This was a pretty good track. The only thing that I didn't like about this was the drum beat. Really soft, and the snares, bleh. All your other music is amazing and 5 worthy.

Anyways,

5/5

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Awesome

Great little boss fight theme. Remindes me of the good ol' games with that boss you JUST couldnt beat. Love all the beats. Great stuff.