A bit repetitive
It sounds very much like a boss battle of some sort, but when it just winds over and over through the same sections over and over, it just doesn't make it as a boss battle theme. It needs a tune to come in!
I'm not suggesting you copy it, but maybe if you listen to some of the classic Final Fantasy Battle/Boss themes, you'll see what I mean.
They come in, similar to yours (but a little bit faster, with those tense-building background parts), and then they'll come in with a tune, that just fits in with the repetitive structure for a little bit, and then the whole structure will change every once in a while, and add a whole new tune.
You did a good job, with what you have so far, and i'm going to download it for learning purposes. (I still don't have down fast, battle type music, and i'd like to get better with them). But I really want to see a nice tune come in with a newer version!! :D 8/10 and 4/5.
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I made this on a deadline. I'm not going to make any more fight songs, but I appreciate all the comments anyway!
I could imagine this in a miniboss battle- actually I think it would fit a big or final boss better. This is really dramatical :) It loops well, too.
Nice addition with the guitar, it makes the sound of it much better. There was nice drums on this, too.
I couldn´t catch any melodies in this, though.
I hate looking back to songs like this. I've improved ten-fold and I just want to slap my past self for making such a shallow song. Shame on you, me!
Ah well, thanks for the review.
This isn't the style that your good at. I suggest sticking with ambient and drum and bass. This was a pretty good track. The only thing that I didn't like about this was the drum beat. Really soft, and the snares, bleh. All your other music is amazing and 5 worthy.
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Oh snap. Sorry it took me a while to reply to this one. I have too many reviews to keep track of nowadays... Ok, well I couldn't agree with you more that a fight song isn't my forte. HOWEVER, they are fun to make, and I'm trying to learn how to make traditional dance styles of techno. I figure it's best to be well-rounded! I'll check out your songs whenever I'm not at work or sleeping or working on music or out with my girlfriend.... whew. Eventually... Thanks for the review!
Great little boss fight theme. Remindes me of the good ol' games with that boss you JUST couldnt beat. Love all the beats. Great stuff.
Is there any song of mine that you haven't reviewed?? I refuse to say thanks again.... oh ok, thanks for the review.
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