I'm writing this, while listening, so bear with me

I really like the intro. The tubular bells (right?) give just the right feeling, along with the drums.
The only thing not fitting here is the bass drum I think, since it feels a bit analog compared to the wonderful sounds of the pads. I don't know how to bypass that, since you really need a 4/4 rhythm I think. Try another kick, maybe that works better.

Now it gets a bit boring, since there's not a lot happening, nice ambience though.

The part from 2:40 is nice. Just gives a little change, while maintaining the ambience. You did a wonderful job at maintaining the ambience during the whole song. The parts are just a little bit too long I think. It gets pretty boring after a
whole lot of bars of the same, while nothing is happening.

From 5:38 you prove you can do it. I feel like that part should come earlier. This is what I was waiting for the whole song :p. This is just awesone.

Overall,
nice ambience, but it just feels a bit too much copy and paste. The ending was great.
8/10
4/5

-Positron, of the Nuclear Teddies-