Kind of slow, and boring, but actually has alot of meat to it for a short loop.
Feel free to leave any constructive criticism , but it won't go under the knife again until it's testable for what it's designed to do, and where it's supposed to go.
Add about 2 samples, 2 synths, 2 drum loops.
30 minutes arranging this bland, and basic chord progression, and note arrangement. 20 minutes on effects. and bake for less than 2 minutes bouncing to mp3 :)