unlike what Rainwave said about the name, im pretty sure that know one is goin to forget the name of this song lol. i do agree about the rimstick though.
5/5 10/10 nice!!
Ironically enough, I gave this a 9 :P
Anyway, I really like your melodies, especially the synths you used.
You really did a good job on that.
It's just two things. First, the title :P Fruity Loops 9 is by far the most unattractive title that can be found on NG. You should give it a cool name, or perhaps something cheesy. Enough to think of! :D
Secondly, there's the beat. The structure is really nice, but the instrumentation is not so great. The kick'll do, but you some sort of rimstick bwump where you could easily place a nice snare or clap.
Anyway, I really liked the song, apart from that weird thing on the afterbeat. You've got a really nice concept here, I'm looking forward to hearing more from you. Keep it up man!