Noice m8 this is really cool I think it belongs in a game with the plot it sets

getting there!

EPIC INTRO! I LOVE IT. maybe add another lead earlier?
maybe some square waves?
thats what i was feeling.
or a detuned saw. but i loved that pad creeping up from underneath. you really need to have pads carry your bottom, unless you have reverb on a lot of your synths to give it depth. pads are good if youre not that great with effects. but i liked that whole 8 bit thing! that was cute.
...the only thing that sorta pissed me off was the outtro. its not just u bro, so many people are getting bad at concluding their songs. i hope im not one of those people!! but you've gotta take more time planning the conclusions of your song. otherwise, people will be like wtf is this guy doing, but to me, a musician, it kinda means the same thing + it leaves me thinking that this guy was like SCREW IT IM DONE!
i mean the song had too many great elements to not be concluded properly.
work on it man, you have a lot of potential!