VARIETY!

That is what i love about this track. It has the same rhythm and this track has a nice depth. Also i like how you bring some of the melodies back.
Even though some may say there are loops, sure, but they work layered like you made them.
I say its a great track. Nice bassline and chords, they all work VERY WELL together =]

The only thing that seems it had the least amount of attention was the bassdrum and percussion...but that is ok man, track is about 30% drums anyway.

Like the idea

but come on man, this is not really considered a song. more in the loop category.
it was kinda painful on the ears. and dont say thats what techno sounds like, cuz its not.

Could be much more polished

This is a pretty good song in general, I have some suggestions though: Bring the bass down a little, listening to this with headphones/logitech speakers, it sounds a little too loud and drowns out the drums. The kick should be a little bigger in my opinion, if you're trying to make a good trance track the kick needs to be pounding and loud. Also that reverse cymbal thing? That could be better. At least add a reverb/delay to the crash cymbal because it sounds like it ends a little too quickly. Also what was that from 1:03 to 1:09? That was a little weird and it threw me off a lot. Add lots of filter sweeps and some FX here and there, just to give it a bigger atmosphere. If you cushion your main lead synth with a reverb it will sound much bigger and not stop so abruptly like it did a few times in the song. Overall, it's a good start but it could be so much better. :P
(also please read my response to your Abridged review!)

-SL-